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Monday, April 12, 2010

Innocent Love

She entered my life like a snowflake,
Everything around me became sweet as a a cake,
Soft and slow, smooth as soot,
Some feeling made me joyous to the root.

First time such feeling came to me,
My heart felt like a shore by the sea,
Every now and then, I thought, it crashed,
Feeling the same when on shore, waves lashed.

All the pain I had began to vanish,
And now my heart has only one wish,
It always lingers in me like a tingle,
And makes my soul to hum a jingle.

Every single moment of any day I think of her,
Why I do so, is to me, still a wonder,
Every thought of her brings smile to my face,
And sets my heartbeats on a special pace.


Her beauty is like the milky shine of a full moon,
Her smile fades away the summer sun at noon,
Her voice is more musical than Beethoven's Symphony,
Her presence fills everything with a sense of harmony.

Every beat of my heart spells her name,
Her image is carved out on my heart's frame,
My eyes always long for a sight of her,
But then, everywhere I see her glimmer.

Her eyes are those I used to see in my dreams,
Deeper than anything else, by all means,
Every act of her is a knock on my heart's door,
And it shakes my soul to the very core.

Is this set of mixed feelings called innocent love,
Which makes everything beautiful as a dove,
If so, I think I am liking it,
I have started loving every bit of it.

I don't know if she feels the same for me,
I can even gift her the sky to make her happy,
I hope that this is not just another game of destiny,
Now I just don't want to be lonely.....

17 comments:

  1. Great Shalabh !! I never knew that you are so good in poetry !! I hope you are not looking to change your profession :P , keep it up and we expect more like this in future . God Bless :)

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  2. Seems like someone is in love . Good going

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  3. It too good and thought from bottom of heart.

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  4. Well Said dear .........very good

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  5. dis one iz really amazing! gr8 job sir!!

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  6. "Is this set of mixed feelings called innocent love,
    Which makes everything beautiful as a dove,"

    --Kya baat h bhai... itni romantic poem...

    "I don't know if she feels the same for me,"

    --Until u ll tell her so.. how would she know yaar....

    "I hope that this is not just another game of destiny,
    Now I just don't want to be lonely..... "

    --Par Chinta na kar.. U ll get her soon.. U ll not be lonely.. I wish u good luck...

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  7. great yaar ...........
    tu shaayar kab se ban gaya .....vaise pyar me sab jaiyzz hai..!!!!

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  8. ur best creation till now!!!

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  9. All The best bro for ur love may u get her......

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  10. gud goin bro!!!
    ab apne liye ek achi si bhabhi dhundh le...

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  11. gr8 rhyme big bro........ab tak ki sabsey acchi.........
    koi dhundli kya.........

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  12. All i can say is that she is the luckiest girl in the world..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  13. its beautifulll...poem dear... i lyked it...keep it up..:)

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  14. hmm!!!!
    wot all iz dis going hmm????

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