She entered my life like a snowflake,
Everything around me became sweet as a a cake,
Soft and slow, smooth as soot,
Some feeling made me joyous to the root.
First time such feeling came to me,
My heart felt like a shore by the sea,
Every now and then, I thought, it crashed,
Feeling the same when on shore, waves lashed.
All the pain I had began to vanish,
And now my heart has only one wish,
It always lingers in me like a tingle,
And makes my soul to hum a jingle.
Every single moment of any day I think of her,
Why I do so, is to me, still a wonder,
Every thought of her brings smile to my face,
And sets my heartbeats on a special pace.
Her beauty is like the milky shine of a full moon,
Her smile fades away the summer sun at noon,
Her voice is more musical than Beethoven's Symphony,
Her presence fills everything with a sense of harmony.
Every beat of my heart spells her name,
Her image is carved out on my heart's frame,
My eyes always long for a sight of her,
But then, everywhere I see her glimmer.
Her eyes are those I used to see in my dreams,
Deeper than anything else, by all means,
Every act of her is a knock on my heart's door,
And it shakes my soul to the very core.
Is this set of mixed feelings called innocent love,
Which makes everything beautiful as a dove,
If so, I think I am liking it,
I have started loving every bit of it.
I don't know if she feels the same for me,
I can even gift her the sky to make her happy,
I hope that this is not just another game of destiny,
Now I just don't want to be lonely.....
Great Shalabh !! I never knew that you are so good in poetry !! I hope you are not looking to change your profession :P , keep it up and we expect more like this in future . God Bless :)
ReplyDeleteSeems like someone is in love . Good going
ReplyDeleteIt too good and thought from bottom of heart.
ReplyDeleteWell Said dear .........very good
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ReplyDelete"Is this set of mixed feelings called innocent love,
ReplyDeleteWhich makes everything beautiful as a dove,"
--Kya baat h bhai... itni romantic poem...
"I don't know if she feels the same for me,"
--Until u ll tell her so.. how would she know yaar....
"I hope that this is not just another game of destiny,
Now I just don't want to be lonely..... "
--Par Chinta na kar.. U ll get her soon.. U ll not be lonely.. I wish u good luck...
great yaar ...........
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ReplyDeleteAll The best bro for ur love may u get her......
ReplyDeletegud goin bro!!!
ReplyDeleteab apne liye ek achi si bhabhi dhundh le...
gr8 rhyme big bro........ab tak ki sabsey acchi.........
ReplyDeletekoi dhundli kya.........
Great....
ReplyDeleteAll i can say is that she is the luckiest girl in the world..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeletesuper poem..ji......
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