tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post36351945360144722..comments2023-06-24T01:40:56.293+05:30Comments on The Rhyme of my Life: My desire ???Shalabh Aggarwalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12005092128073586867noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-78136716674707326702010-08-10T16:39:54.822+05:302010-08-10T16:39:54.822+05:30What I can say for this is Awesome!!
Ultimate work...What I can say for this is Awesome!!<br />Ultimate work hai bhai......<br />I really likes it....anujhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16217892683200647730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-24943854685725140122010-05-29T20:22:16.547+05:302010-05-29T20:22:16.547+05:30mast dude keep it upmast dude keep it upShivamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11984623190498069956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-5329165770905620022010-03-29T00:39:07.157+05:302010-03-29T00:39:07.157+05:30gud one for the starter....gud one for the starter....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17851383319565981279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-35601485635948673202010-03-19T13:34:11.278+05:302010-03-19T13:34:11.278+05:301st line - "dats very much visible in ua eyes...1st line - "dats very much visible in ua eyes n talks"<br />4th line - "koi ni,its b'coz its jst t start"<br />5th line - "wait n watch, n keep on moving, u'll one day"<br />7th line - "u'll one day"<br />11th line - "dats me.... sry,, dats God n ____"<br />13th & 14th line - "therz lot to gain. just keep ur MISSION & ur Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972161547676504622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-82488570315734813042010-01-28T01:45:55.287+05:302010-01-28T01:45:55.287+05:30mast
hai
BIDDDUUUU!!!<b>mast</b><br /><i>hai</i><br /><b> BIDDDUUUU!!!</b>Pratynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-10109094269980972502010-01-25T20:15:51.602+05:302010-01-25T20:15:51.602+05:30Nice one !Nice one !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17843178012199670183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-77259281200381046332010-01-25T19:02:04.044+05:302010-01-25T19:02:04.044+05:30awesome poem big bro...........
great start .... ...awesome poem big bro...........<br /><br />great start .... <br /><br />and keep going on.............<br /> mere dil ko choo gayimy rhyme my lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04917935813840541834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-50085801446059678672010-01-24T19:25:13.163+05:302010-01-24T19:25:13.163+05:30amazin poetry..keep it up!!amazin poetry..keep it up!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16294629432856941181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-50053636175399603562010-01-22T12:34:41.964+05:302010-01-22T12:34:41.964+05:30gud thoughts dear...
must say full f pain...
keep...gud thoughts dear...<br />must say full f pain...<br /><br />keep on goin wid these....<br /><br />all d best bro....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16920699233333862436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-70022001985002420982010-01-10T22:50:06.322+05:302010-01-10T22:50:06.322+05:30hey buddies
dis z not a copy frm anywhere
100% o...hey buddies<br /><br />dis z not a copy frm anywhere<br /><br />100% original matter of mineShalabh Aggarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12005092128073586867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-86726278861539209862010-01-10T22:42:24.045+05:302010-01-10T22:42:24.045+05:30this is good yaar.... shi ja rha hai achi shuruaat...this is good yaar.... shi ja rha hai achi shuruaat hai ydi tune hi likha hai.... if u r coping this poem that's not fare haan but ye tere life per fit baithti... hai to tu yeh kehkar to bach hi sakta hai...<br /><br /><br />i like this poem too.. <br /><br />bhai sab band karke isi me time... spend kar then u will be a gud poet...chal itna hi keh sakta hu tere liye mein....Himanshu Goyalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12489776420494504821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-57084451922631713292009-12-16T01:33:53.167+05:302009-12-16T01:33:53.167+05:30achchhi hai kafi achahhi poem hai.
kiski hai?
agar...achchhi hai kafi achahhi poem hai.<br />kiski hai?<br />agar pakad le tujhe to sorry bol dena.<br />ok<br /><br />mazak kar raha hoo bhai ji<br />nice poem<br />keep it upAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08394678961018875379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-68482009905316322942009-12-10T17:26:36.743+05:302009-12-10T17:26:36.743+05:30Great start !
Keep it up !
Tu to chhupa rustam n...Great start !<br /><br />Keep it up !<br /><br />Tu to chhupa rustam nikla yaar !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17843178012199670183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-44582822274569748962009-11-15T23:53:09.701+05:302009-11-15T23:53:09.701+05:30Really Good One..Straight from your heart.
-Mohit...Really Good One..Straight from your heart.<br /><br />-MohitMohitGoyalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07102760952150034216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-20781455635097210542009-11-02T22:26:20.219+05:302009-11-02T22:26:20.219+05:30arre yaar yeh poetry n all..thoda 'over the he...arre yaar yeh poetry n all..thoda 'over the head' ho jaati hai mere liye...wat i felt ki it was sorta pessimistic..since u said tht we shud comment so tht u cn improve..so i told u ths..rest it was gud..didnt knw ths talent was hidden in u...likhta reh.. :)tanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14791058847055315820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-19638562926397012132009-10-29T14:44:44.172+05:302009-10-29T14:44:44.172+05:30Bhai bahut wadiya...
Bhai bahut saara dard h... t...Bhai bahut wadiya...<br /><br />Bhai bahut saara dard h... tumahre dil o dimag me... Aise hi kavitayen likhate rahna... <br /><br />Sixth para me to bhoot ka ahsaas h...Prakhar Bansalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14212569608749502039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4426783966670731416.post-3001100320291079102009-10-24T00:53:27.888+05:302009-10-24T00:53:27.888+05:30its nyc...its nyc...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07945439213767999219noreply@blogger.com